In the English class
In the English class last week, when john’s English teacher taught “we are the world.“ john was too tired to listen what his teacher says. His friend, Tom, noticed John was sleeping, but he didn’t wake him up.
While john was sleeping, he had a dream. He became an English teacher in future. The grammar of class was so boring that many students fell asleep. Few of the students knew what he taught. When he saw the scene, he was mad because they didn’t study hard. In order to keep his students awake, he walked to the students who fell asleep, and beat their desks. The loudly sound came so suddenly, so many students were horror-stricken.
Meanwhile, John’s teacher noticed john. He walked to John, and waked him. John found he still was a student, and felt a little embarrassed.
You have made progress but there are mistakes in the sentences, like,”john was too tired to listen what his teacher was saying” and “Few of the students tended to learn what he taught.” Please correct those mistakes.
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